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Fairy Tale Rewrite
?This assignment asks you to rewrite a fairy tale studied in class. You will need to:
?1. Write a creative piece: three poems, a short story, or one or two chapters of a fairy tale novel (creative works 3-8 pages). This work will not be graded. ????lready did that)
2. Write an essay examining one element of your revision.
In other words, this essay is not about authorial intent explaining what you meant by certain changes.

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Fairy Tale Rewrite
?This assignment asks you to rewrite a fairy tale studied in class. You will need to:
?1. Write a creative piece: three poems, a short story, or one or two chapters of a fairy tale novel (creative works 3-8 pages). This work will not be graded. ????lready did that)
2. Write an essay examining one element of your revision.
In other words, this essay is not about authorial intent explaining what you meant by certain changes. This is an essay about examining the changes/ consistencies in your retelling with the “original” and discovering how your specific background affects how you rewrite a fairy tale. For example, I am not looking for an essay that says “Cinderella loses her glass slipper so I made her loose her basketball shoe…” Instead, if you were examining how class appears in your rewrite you might write, “Cinderella’s shoe in this version is a basketball sneaker. The sneaker speaks to modern society that values this type of footwear and the manner in which Cinderella discusses her lost shoe exposes modern about class…”
It might help to consider the creative piece as written by another person. Writing in third person might help gain needed distance. For example: “Daniels changes the plot when she… which shows…”
Hi Mashael,
I really enjoyed your retelling and I think there’s a lot you can work from. I do have a couple small suggestions for the mechanics of your creative piece. Can you make it more obvious sooner in the story that the setting is OLD Egypt. I assumed it was set in modern Egypt until a the end of the first page that I realized it was set centuries before.
Second, if you have detail that will be important later in the story, you want to introduce it earlier than when it become important. That means if the star of love design on the bracelet becomes important, you should add that description when you first introduce the bracelet.
My last comment about the story is why is
– make it evident older Egypt earlier
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