genb 4350 assignment 4

genb 4350 assignment 4

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Fact:
This case study brings into picture the fact that George is a manager who is working for XYZ, Inc. which is a company that deals with developing software for medical service industry. He is happy and content with his present job but he wants to pursue his dream to built software for educational purposes. While he was working he was offered an opportunity to work for MedTrain, Inc. as a consultant where the company is offering to build training software games for medical purposes.
Issue:
The main issue that has been presented in this case is that which path should George follow to continue his working in XYZ Inc., to quit the job and open his own business of developing the software…

genb 4350 assignment 4